Poem: Drifting
Thank you for stopping by. “Drifting” can now be found in my poetry collection “Origami Stars and Hot Air Moon” published by Winter Goose Publishing.
Poetry, Horror, Psychological Thrillers
Poetry, Horror, Psychological Thrillers
Thank you for stopping by. “Drifting” can now be found in my poetry collection “Origami Stars and Hot Air Moon” published by Winter Goose Publishing.
I hope for that big attractor… but the space is wide, way to easy to get lost.
So true.
I loved the references to space and time. Beautiful work, Mandie =)
Awe, thanks. 😊
Lovely piece, Mandie 🙂
Thank you, Rachael. At some point, I’ll post more horror, but until then I’m glad you enjoyed this piece. 🙂
I especially enjoyed how your verbs and adjectives are all space themed. I must confess the last sentence did confuse me. Sorry, to be a little dense at times. Overall a wonderful piece.
Thank you, Christy. And no worries about getting hung up on the last line. Perhaps it would clear up the confusion to know (without trying to ruin it by giving my exact meaning) that sometimes when a piece I write commingles anger and sadness it takes on a dark, sarcastic tone.
Thank you as always for reading and taking the time to comment. It means the world to me!
The references to space and time! Well written! Wonderful piece, Mandie.
Thank you, EM. I’m so glad you stopped by, and enjoyed this piece! 😀
You’re utmost welcome, Mandie.
Great piece Mandie – I love the imagery and the space theme running throughout the poem.
Thank you, Scarlett!
Wonderful.
I am star-struck!
Haha Thanks, ceayr!