Short Story: Fragility Part 6

Part 6 of the psychological thriller "Fragility."

This is the final part of a serial, find the previous parts here.


“Chris.” Someone was gently shaking his shoulder from behind. The voice felt so familiar to him. He shook his head one last time at Dr. Stevens as if one more denial would convince her that she had the wrong man; then he turned to the person beckoning him from behind.

Pat cupped his face between her hands. “Are you okay, Chris?”

He looked pleadingly into her eyes and then turned back to Dr. Stevens, but all that was behind him was the living room of their apartment. “I–”

“I know,” Pat said reassuringly. “It’s okay.”

Chris’s shoulders sagged as he leaned into Pat, “I’m so scared. I don’t know what’s going on.”

“Everything’s fine. I’m here now.” Pat gently ran her fingers through his hair, lifted his chin, and met his gaze. “You can stay here with me.” She smoothed his hospital-issued, faded blue t-shirt. She covered his ears as he laid his head to rest on her shoulder, blocking out the woman with her imaginary bird, the man ranting across the room, and the pendulum of a man still rocking on the floor repeating Chris’s last exclamation. Lifting her hand slightly she placed her lips close to his ear. “I’ll never leave you again.”

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7 Responses

  1. Diana Tyler (Eccentric Muse) says:

    This was a great story and it kept me at the edge of my seat! Mandie, thank you for sharing your brilliant writing with us! I feel sorry for Chris, though. The poor thing! 😟

    • Mandie Hines says:

      I have often pondered about what makes a person’s reality, and if they were losing a grip on it, whether they would know it. It seems like a slippery slope. The mind is very fragile, as is our perception of the world around us.

      • Diana Tyler (Eccentric Muse) says:

        I agree that the mind is a fragile thing and this piece was excellently written!

  2. “Chris’s shoulders sagged as he leaned into Pat, “I’m so scared. I don’t know what’s going on.”. Poor guy! 🙁

    That whole last paragraph was the perfect way to end this story. Great job!

  3. The poor guy really got ran through the mill. Lots on tension. Excellent writing, Mandie. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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